Poetry requests
Thu Dec 16, 2004 6:03 am
So, are you looking for a chilling sonnet for your beau or a funny limmerick to lift your mood? Or maybe you just want to test my creativity. This thread is made just for that. I will "try" to look through here one a day, picking one person to write a poem for. Your only job is to supply me with ideas. This is my first request board, so I guess I'll figure this out as time goes on. Please try me.
Thu Dec 16, 2004 10:06 pm
I think this would be a bit more appropriate in soemthing like Misc. Discussion...
Thu Dec 16, 2004 10:51 pm
Even if you "think" something rather than direct, it is still backseat modding to make a post solely to sway another member about how to conduct themself on the forum..:Requiem:. wrote:I think this would be a bit more appropriate in soemthing like Misc. Discussion...
Fri Dec 17, 2004 12:48 am
Okay. I want to test your creativity.
Let's see...
describe a bowl of whipcream! Try to with ryming.
That'd be awesome.
Let's see...
describe a bowl of whipcream! Try to with ryming.
That'd be awesome.
Fri Dec 17, 2004 4:43 am
Oooh, how about something about Dernhelm?
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Fri Dec 17, 2004 6:08 am
That frothy cream of purest white
When blended with sweet love,
Scooped from a bowl, can bring delight
Like snow from up above.
I plan to work a few more lines into that, but I like the idea.
I will work on one for Dernhelm (Eowyn's alter-ego) in bed tonight. I might post it tomorrow.
When blended with sweet love,
Scooped from a bowl, can bring delight
Like snow from up above.
I plan to work a few more lines into that, but I like the idea.
I will work on one for Dernhelm (Eowyn's alter-ego) in bed tonight. I might post it tomorrow.
Fri Dec 17, 2004 1:28 pm
Marshmallow Sky wrote:That frothy cream of purest white
When blended with sweet love,
Scooped from a bowl, can bring delight
Like snow from up above.
I plan to work a few more lines into that, but I like the idea.
I will work on one for Dernhelm (Eowyn's alter-ego) in bed tonight. I might post it tomorrow.
Ooh, nice.
Rhyming is quite solid and not forced at all, a very hard thing to do. *applauds*
Fri Dec 17, 2004 11:10 pm
Oh. I like it! Whip cream is good and that makes is sound even better! 
Mon Dec 20, 2004 5:05 am
Okay, your poem about Dernhelm isn't finished yet. It has 1 stanza to go. But...
Into battle would they ride
The Rohan warriors great
In one, however, by their side,
A woman donned the plate
Dernhelm was her warrior name
And no mere man was she
For, in the battle, no means tame,
She proved ability
With the sword, her favorite tool,
And shield to protect,
She slew the king of Nazgul
And only then she wept
Her weeping was most bitter,
For Theoden, her king,
Had lost all of his vigor
And died a bloody scene
It needs a last stanza, but I can't think one up. Any ideas?
Into battle would they ride
The Rohan warriors great
In one, however, by their side,
A woman donned the plate
Dernhelm was her warrior name
And no mere man was she
For, in the battle, no means tame,
She proved ability
With the sword, her favorite tool,
And shield to protect,
She slew the king of Nazgul
And only then she wept
Her weeping was most bitter,
For Theoden, her king,
Had lost all of his vigor
And died a bloody scene
It needs a last stanza, but I can't think one up. Any ideas?