Sun Feb 26, 2006 12:47 am
cipher_text wrote:i got a math question that i couldnt get":
the textbook asks me to write the following as a single fraction:
... 1 + 1
./`5 ./`3 =
the answer is ./`3 + ./`5
............................../`15
i need to know how to get the answer.
Sun Feb 26, 2006 2:13 am
Wed Mar 01, 2006 10:04 pm
Sun Mar 05, 2006 7:33 am
Inexistence wrote:Hey everyone, I'm having trouble with my math work and the equation of a straight line. Just so you know I'm only a 12 year old so please don't tell me any stuff I won't understand.
My teacher told us stuff and I didn't understand a bit of it and she wouldn't explain it to me again.
I have a horizontal line along these axis, running on x axis from -4 to -2.5 (3 centimeter boxes across) it is at 2 on the y axis. What I don't get is what to figure out. My teacher said something about triangles but I don't understand. Also, we have to use the equation y=mx+b as a basis.
I need help quickly please.
Sun Mar 05, 2006 10:51 pm
Mon Mar 06, 2006 10:48 pm
Throughout the course of the play, Shakespeare effectively shows a meaningful transition of Othello from a respectable general to a ruthless tyrant due to Iago’s manipulation from the beginning, through the middle and the ending of the play.
Throughout the course of the play, Shakespeare effectively shows the devastation of Iago’s manipulation upon Othello based on his actions and decisions from the beginning, middle and ending of the play.
Thu Mar 09, 2006 9:51 pm
Thu Mar 09, 2006 11:39 pm
shapu wrote:You can probably leave the part out about the beginning, middle, and end. After all, the "throughout" covers that.
Wed Mar 22, 2006 3:42 pm
Wed Mar 22, 2006 3:52 pm
Wed Mar 22, 2006 4:12 pm
shapu wrote:You don't necessarily need to know an entrepreneur right now. Just find any new business near where you live - and there you go. Has anything that isn't a chain opened up in the last 6 months to five years in your neighborhood?
Sat Apr 15, 2006 10:36 pm
The October Revolution has marked a historical turning point for Russia and to this day, it’s affect on the world has been apparent.
Sun Apr 16, 2006 11:34 am
The human aftermath of the First World War wrote:When the First World War ended on November 11th, 1918, Europeans could breathe a sigh of a relief and welcome the established peace. This peace was not devoid of sacrifices and consequences, though: over 14 million people died, and an entire generation lost the previous century’s optimism. Both texts discussed in this essay are set in a post World War I world – and deal with different aspects of its impact. Through the analysis and comparison of their main theme and inherent message, this essay attempts to establish the psychological impact of the First World War on the people involved.
Tue Apr 18, 2006 12:20 pm
Tue Apr 18, 2006 11:59 pm
Hunter Lupe wrote:Surely you mean effect?
Ignoring the typo, the effect of the October revolution isn't really apparent today (1924 and 1991 are the relatively more interesting years), so the second part of the thesis sets you up to argue for a rather questionable viewpoint.
What's missing in your concept of an essay is the Why? (inability to construct a thesis sentence is usually a sign of that, as a thesis sentence sums up the main purpose of the essay): you want to "talk about the revolution before it began, during and after its reign", a fairly boring way to approach things (you'll end up stating "and then this and that happened because of this and that caused by that guy").
Your prime objective should be to provide and argue for a particular viewpoint, not to restate the facts as written in your history book. Pick a point that you'd be arguying for: whether the October revolution did more good than harm, whether some nasty events could have been avoided if something happened, the October Revolution was unnescersary and undemocratic... anything flies, as long as its an opinion you can argue for.
An essay's thesis is the point the essay is trying to advocate (and perhaps a brief explanation of how you're going to pursue the topic). An example would be:
Subject (unspecific): Pets in Denmark
Topic (narrowed down Subject): The predominance of cats over dogs in modern Danish households
Thesis Sentence: Despite stereotypes of the faithful dog and the faithless feline, a majority of the Danish population now prefer cats because of the living patterns prevalent in modern households.
Alternatively, if it's any inspiration, here's an introduction paragraph to a late-night essay I wrote recently (thesis sentence is last, essay is for my English Lit class):The human aftermath of the First World War wrote:When the First World War ended on November 11th, 1918, Europeans could breathe a sigh of a relief and welcome the established peace. This peace was not devoid of sacrifices and consequences, though: over 14 million people died, and an entire generation lost the previous century’s optimism. Both texts discussed in this essay are set in a post World War I world – and deal with different aspects of its impact. Through the analysis and comparison of their main theme and inherent message, this essay attempts to establish the psychological impact of the First World War on the people involved.
(Afterthought: I should have specified what sort of psychological impact I was trying to interpret into the works in the thesis sentence as well as the introduction paragraph.)