Ixist wrote:Ammer wrote:I'm writing a paper on the United Nations and if its relevant in insuring peace and security. The problem I'm having is actually coming up with an opening sentence or sentences for the essay. I have the information for points but I can't for the life of me start this essay with a general look on the topic.
Any thoughts?
Maybe talk a bit about how it was created after WWII to ensure peace, but without the constraintns of the League of Nations. Then say something like "However, does the United Nations live up to it's name? Is it actually fulfill it's original duty and ensure global peace?" Then you could go into your whole schpiel about whether it does or doesn't. It also makes it easy to answer the question at the end by saying "Yes, it does live up to it's purpose" or "no, it does not live up to it's purpose".
I did write a few paragaphs on how it was created and I talked about the League of Nations as well.
But I think I need something more general, becuase the creation of the UN can actually be used in my essay as more than an introduction.
Edit:
Actually, I think you're onto something. Thanks Ixist!













